![]() ![]() ![]() Also, this persistent POV is utterly boring, reading her, the character’s, inner voice rattle on and on about fear and pride and revenge and sex, and using tech jargon clearly misunderstood. ![]() It is a huge problem to write using a “genius” POV when the author himself is just a regular guy and not even a great writer. Why? It just cost ten bucks and so many people is saying it’s the book of their lives. We’ve already long lost Kansas at this point less than twenty pages in. Her response to this is to try to control nuclear arsenals and the whole internet infrastructure and save the world as a tirant herself. Its main character is a naive paranoid girl, a “genius” tech titan, whose main fear is to be grabbed by CIA and endure torture for helping citizens before FEMA arrives in the wake of a natural catastrophe. The author begins depicting a near future US society that is nothing more than today’s China. Most narrative choices are completely unbelievable. This is a mess of a stream of thought fantasy novel in a “futuristic” setting. ![]()
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